Hey guys I’m a young 15 year old rapper and I just wanna spit something for you and get your honest feedback…if you like it let me know but if not give me some impute on what I need to do to improve….please don’t ignore give me your honest opinion
Yo I’m thinking outside the box when I plan my assaults, going all in never thinking to stop or hault, striking swift like a lightning bolt, erasing my targets, kicking in the door like the Feds once the courts granted them warrants, doing nothing but torment, the unfortunate, outsider obstructing my crew, using choppas when the wars at it’s pinnacle, wiping out every individual, opposing the click, the red beam on the barrow guarenntes each opposer gets dealt wit, leaving a trail of carnage, having stacks of bodies overflowing the garbage, if niggas refuse to acknowledge, the danger right before their eyes, I’m squeezing the trigger till all my opponents been neutralized, then scheme and device, a second invasion to wipeout the remaining civilians, and won’t call of the assault till the casualty numbers in the upper millions, to hell with scarfaces I’m targeting the women and childrens, kidnapping my enemies family and using em’ as leverage, then when his guards down let him witness his loved ones slowly perish, cuz niggas gotta be dealt wit if they act foolish, the consequcens are mandatory I’m following basic street principle, gotta get at niggas even if the offense is minimal, do something identical, but with a little more venom, stand firm and let em’ know any disreaspect can easily escalate to a murder session
There’s more but I thought I’ll just finish there, hope you liked it but if not feel free to critizise….please GIVE FEEDBACK
Well I’ll give you this bro – the lyrics are pretty ill but it all depends how it flows when you’re actually dropping them…props though
Side note: I produce for fun and if you’re interested in trying to put a track together we can see what I have that would match what you want to do (free obviously, I do this for fun). Anyways, find me on twitter if you want @R0Wmusic
HEY GUYS IM A RAPPER AND I WOULD LIKE FOR YALL TO CHECK ME OUT I KNOW YALL LOOKIN LIKE THIS PROLLY JUST ANOTHER NIGGA TRYING TO SPIT AND HE WACK BUT CHECK ME OUT ON YOUTUBE I PROMISE NOT TO DISSAPOINT lilkaz604
check me out tonight at magic. formerly LAx., DJ t Dash doe .
suup LAx this is laura from the gym. ill definitely be there tonight. break a leg
fire
This is proper,pusha t been dropping them jewels lately….
I forgot where i heard these beat from but he did his job fa sho…
4.5
Hey guys I’m a young 15 year old rapper and I just wanna spit something for you and get your honest feedback…if you like it let me know but if not give me some impute on what I need to do to improve….please don’t ignore give me your honest opinion
Yo I’m thinking outside the box when I plan my assaults, going all in never thinking to stop or hault, striking swift like a lightning bolt, erasing my targets, kicking in the door like the Feds once the courts granted them warrants, doing nothing but torment, the unfortunate, outsider obstructing my crew, using choppas when the wars at it’s pinnacle, wiping out every individual, opposing the click, the red beam on the barrow guarenntes each opposer gets dealt wit, leaving a trail of carnage, having stacks of bodies overflowing the garbage, if niggas refuse to acknowledge, the danger right before their eyes, I’m squeezing the trigger till all my opponents been neutralized, then scheme and device, a second invasion to wipeout the remaining civilians, and won’t call of the assault till the casualty numbers in the upper millions, to hell with scarfaces I’m targeting the women and childrens, kidnapping my enemies family and using em’ as leverage, then when his guards down let him witness his loved ones slowly perish, cuz niggas gotta be dealt wit if they act foolish, the consequcens are mandatory I’m following basic street principle, gotta get at niggas even if the offense is minimal, do something identical, but with a little more venom, stand firm and let em’ know any disreaspect can easily escalate to a murder session
There’s more but I thought I’ll just finish there, hope you liked it but if not feel free to critizise….please GIVE FEEDBACK
Well I’ll give you this bro – the lyrics are pretty ill but it all depends how it flows when you’re actually dropping them…props though
Side note: I produce for fun and if you’re interested in trying to put a track together we can see what I have that would match what you want to do (free obviously, I do this for fun). Anyways, find me on twitter if you want @R0Wmusic
Your lyrics suck! you want to go to war u 15 u idiot! u ever held a hammer? seen a fed?
Sorry but you wack son
Got some anger in your heart, son?
yo could you send me some trap or soul beats to ttblfc@hotmail.com thanks so much
its pretty dope I spit too check my soundcloud http://soundcloud.com/micangelo716
My nigga just wen in… taking ova da game, Tony Montana
crazy as alway’s
This nigga fake
Pusha goes in but the beat and especially the hook is horrible lol. 4 stars
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Lol @the king of coke rap
HEY GUYS IM A RAPPER AND I WOULD LIKE FOR YALL TO CHECK ME OUT I KNOW YALL LOOKIN LIKE THIS PROLLY JUST ANOTHER NIGGA TRYING TO SPIT AND HE WACK BUT CHECK ME OUT ON YOUTUBE I PROMISE NOT TO DISSAPOINT lilkaz604